Thursday, August 28, 2008

Story

My name is Josh and for a living I am a Carpenter. I'm six foot one, two hundred and five pounds. On the outside I have black hair, my body type is muscular, riped, athletic basketball type. My clothing style is Ed Hardy, LRG, basically small shirts with designs on them and hats sometimes. My best qualities are that I am flexible to listen to people and I have a have sense of humor. My worst qualities are I'm lazy when it comes to work and I have a ego. I am easy going most of the time except when I'm in a bad mood. My weaknesses are saying no to people when they ask me for something. I really don't hate anybody, I love my new born kid Karon.
After I came from the bedroom I told my wife that I wanted the baby. I was thinking how after all she has put me through she wants me to stay or her having the baby. She had a affair twice and wanted me to forgive her. I didn't want the baby seeing many different men in this house. I wasn't leaving with out my son. She was yelling that she wanted the baby and I started walking towards her. I grabbed the baby not even hearing the baby's reaction. I grabbed him really tightly next to the stove and began saying let go he's my son. I wanted him so badly because he's the only thing that matters in life to me right now. So I grabbed the baby taking Maria fingers off. Maria screamed and grabbed the other babies arm. Then not noticing the baby the worst think happen. We killed it by puling his arms. When the baby died we called the ambulance. I became angry, ashamed of what we have did, miserable, and heartbroken. I yelled and cried for along time. I realized that I should of taken her to court or came in a relaxed mood.

1 comment:

amypfan said...

This makes it very clear why he should have the child instead of her. Nice job making him a sympathetic character.